Does Television Make Us Clever or Not?

Learning Intention: We are learning to: write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade someone about my writing.

I think television does not make us clever because it has cartoons  full of violence. They showed people who hurt themselves and other people. It has movies that people say words that are not good. Television makes our eyes hurt from staying up too late.

I think television makes us clever 

Sometimes watching television makes us clever because it has News that tells us what is happening. They have the weather report that can tell us that it is going to rain or sunny. It has animal facts that tells us how they reproduce, or what do they eat, or how do they look like, or where do they live.

Watching television is bad because it gives us nightmares. If you sleep late for school you will sleep during the test,writing,RE,topic, and PE. Grown-ups sometimes have work so they watch TV

Fish make good pets

learning Intention:We are learning how to write persuasive writing. 
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree with my arguments.

People say that they love fish because they are adorable and they swim around. I think fishes can be scared or shy to us. They live in warm water so that they don't get cold by their body. They get eaten by bigger fishes that grow.

Sometimes people don't like fish because they are a bit boring because when they swim and swim people get tired of looking at them. They can't walk or run because they don't have oxygen to breathe. I think kids like fishes because of their colour like rainbow fish, gold fish, clownfish and dory fish. They can't live in hot water because they will die from breathing.