learning Intention:We are learning how to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree with my arguments.
People say that they love fish because they are adorable and they swim around. I think fishes can be scared or shy to us. They live in warm water so that they don't get cold by their body. They get eaten by bigger fishes that grow.
Sometimes people don't like fish because they are a bit boring because when they swim and swim people get tired of looking at them. They can't walk or run because they don't have oxygen to breathe. I think kids like fishes because of their colour like rainbow fish, gold fish, clownfish and dory fish. They can't live in hot water because they will die from breathing.
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
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Wednesday, 14 June 2017
Sharks -by Mo'onia
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a report.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I write a report about sharks.
Sharks are fish, they are cold blooded. They are not mammals.
Sharks can be found in the oceans. Some live in the rivers and lakes. The female sharks lays fertilised eggs that hatch later but most sharks give birth to live young.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I write a report about sharks.
Sharks are fish, they are cold blooded. They are not mammals.
Sharks can be found in the oceans. Some live in the rivers and lakes. The female sharks lays fertilised eggs that hatch later but most sharks give birth to live young.
Sharks have sharp teeth. They have a tail,flippers and fins. They can also be extremely big and heavy. Sharks eat seals,crabs,squids,sea lions,fish, other sharks,and even turtles.
A group of sharks can attack whales. Sharks move their bodies from side to side through the water. A shark must keep swimming or it will sink. Others move faster using their tails.

Sharks are fast swimmers.
Thursday, 11 May 2017
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