Friday 11 March 2016

Sofi the Butterfly By Mo'onia

L.I.- W.A.L.T- write a narrative story about tiny creatures.                Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I wrote a story about a butterfly and a snail..  

                              Sofi the butterfly 
Once upon a time there was a butterfly named Sofi. She was so pretty she can fly in the air. She meet Max, the snail. He said,
'' hi nice to meet you, what's  your name ?'' "My name is Sofi the butterfly'', she said, "lets go and play hide and seek". Sofi went to hide  and the snail counted and said'' here I come Sofi". He found her hiding in the leaves of the tree. 

The next day her mum made snacks for  Sofi and Max,  and they ate it all up. They walked to their beds and they sleep. When they woke up they watched television Dora the Explorer.  They  saw Dora and Boots and they have so much fun. Later Max went home.