Last Thursday I went down by the river. I saw Emily feeding the fish all by herself. Next, I heard her screamed for help. She fell in the water. I helped her out of the cold water with my clothes on. I got her out and I was shivering.
Her mother said,''Thank you for saving my daughter'' Emily was shivering and change her clothes. Her mum wrap her with a blanket and she was sent to bed.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
