Friday 8 July 2016

Carrot cake is healthy.

Learning Intention- We are learning to- write an argument. about if carrot cake is healthy.
Success Criteria: I know I could do this if I write an argument  if carrot cake is healthy.
                           Carrot Cake is healthy
I partly disagree that carrot cake makes us strong because it has lots of carrots and its healthy. I like carrots because it make your muscles strong. Carrot cake is healthy because it has vitamins. I like it because it makes me feel happy. I like Carrot cake because it gives you energy.

I partly disagree that carrot cake is healthy because it will make us grow up strong and it will make your eyes better. Carrot cake is partly healthy to me because it dehydrated. Carrot cake is partly healthy to me because it has lots of my favourite things in it. Carrot cake is partly healthy because it makes you feel low sugar. 

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