I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Thursday, 16 March 2017
Walking with my Grandpa- By Moonia Tupou
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a recount using full stops and capital letters correctly .
One day my Grandpa and I went for a walk. First we have to put on our sport shoes and tie it. Then we get our drinking bottles and towels,and off we go walking.
I was tired so I had a drink. My Grandpa wasn't tired at all. So we went for a long jog until we reach home. My Grandpa had a sleep. I ask my mum if we could have food at Mac Donald's. We ate there and we had a great time.
Tuesday, 7 March 2017
Thursday, 2 March 2017
My school holidays- by Moonia
My School Holidays
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
I can't wait to go to the beach !
On the holidays my two cousins, Auntie, sister and I went for a long drive to the beach. We stop at the ice cream shop. We bought jelly ice cream, chocolate ice, and another chocolate. We ate it until we arrived to the beach. We look for a spot and we sat there. My cousin and I found seashells and we play in the sand.
My sister went for a drive to get pizza. I went to the water to play with my friends. I went to the deepest water.
Later I got out of the water to eat chicken and chips. After we eat we pack our stuff and we went to drive home.
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
I can't wait to go to the beach !
On the holidays my two cousins, Auntie, sister and I went for a long drive to the beach. We stop at the ice cream shop. We bought jelly ice cream, chocolate ice, and another chocolate. We ate it until we arrived to the beach. We look for a spot and we sat there. My cousin and I found seashells and we play in the sand.
My sister went for a drive to get pizza. I went to the water to play with my friends. I went to the deepest water.
Later I got out of the water to eat chicken and chips. After we eat we pack our stuff and we went to drive home.
Wednesday, 1 March 2017
How To Bake Potato Gratin -by Moonia
How To Bake Potato Gratin
L.I.- We are learning to write an instructions.
Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I write the instructions in order using Verb at the beginning of each sentence how to bake potato gratin.
Ingredients:
Potatoes
Cheese Sauce
Salt, Grated Cheese
Steps:
. Wash the potatoes.
. Slice the potatoes thinly.
. Arrange the potatoes on the baking dish to cover the space.
. Cover the potatoes with cheese sauce.
. Put another layer of potatoes on top of the cheese sauce.
. Repeat covering the potatoes with cheese sauce until all is used.
. Bake in the oven at 180 degrees until cook.
. Cool it down before eating
L.I.- We are learning to write an instructions.
Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I write the instructions in order using Verb at the beginning of each sentence how to bake potato gratin.
Ingredients:
Potatoes
Cheese Sauce
Salt, Grated Cheese
Steps:
. Wash the potatoes.
. Slice the potatoes thinly.
. Arrange the potatoes on the baking dish to cover the space.
. Cover the potatoes with cheese sauce.
. Put another layer of potatoes on top of the cheese sauce.
. Repeat covering the potatoes with cheese sauce until all is used.
. Bake in the oven at 180 degrees until cook.
. Cool it down before eating
Monday, 20 February 2017
The Day I saved Emily - By Moonia
The Day I saved Emily
Last Thursday I went down by the river. I saw Emily feeding the fish all by herself. Next, I heard her screamed for help. She fell in the water. I helped her out of the cold water with my clothes on. I got her out and I was shivering.
Her mother said,''Thank you for saving my daughter'' Emily was shivering and change her clothes. Her mum wrap her with a blanket and she was sent to bed.
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Thursday I went down by the river. I saw Emily feeding the fish all by herself. Next, I heard her screamed for help. She fell in the water. I helped her out of the cold water with my clothes on. I got her out and I was shivering.
Her mother said,''Thank you for saving my daughter'' Emily was shivering and change her clothes. Her mum wrap her with a blanket and she was sent to bed.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Thursday, 15 December 2016
Jump the plank by Moonia
Measurement-Distance
Jump the Plank
Learning Intention: W.A.L.- to measure how far we could jump the ''plank'' using centimetres.
Success Criteria: I can do this when I measured the distance of how far I could jump the plank.
Our group jump the ''plank'' and measured how far each one of us had jumped. We use a chair as our plank and we started the measurement from the foot of the chair to the back of our heel where we landed from our jump. This are the results.
1. Heneliena jumped was 105 centimetre long.
2. Uinisiete jump was 120 centimetre long.
3. And my jump was 91 centimetre long.
4. Te Raiana jump was 90 centimetre long.
5. Christopher jump was 90 the same as Te Raiana.
SUMMARY
Uinisiete jumped the farthest.
Heneliena jump the second farthest.
I jump the third farthest.
Te Riana and Christopher jump the fourth and the least farthest.
Jump the Plank
Learning Intention: W.A.L.- to measure how far we could jump the ''plank'' using centimetres.
Success Criteria: I can do this when I measured the distance of how far I could jump the plank.
Our group jump the ''plank'' and measured how far each one of us had jumped. We use a chair as our plank and we started the measurement from the foot of the chair to the back of our heel where we landed from our jump. This are the results.
1. Heneliena jumped was 105 centimetre long.
2. Uinisiete jump was 120 centimetre long.
3. And my jump was 91 centimetre long.
4. Te Raiana jump was 90 centimetre long.
5. Christopher jump was 90 the same as Te Raiana.
SUMMARY
Uinisiete jumped the farthest.
Heneliena jump the second farthest.
I jump the third farthest.
Te Riana and Christopher jump the fourth and the least farthest.
Friday, 18 November 2016
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