I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Thursday, 16 March 2017
Walking with my Grandpa- By Moonia Tupou
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a recount using full stops and capital letters correctly .
One day my Grandpa and I went for a walk. First we have to put on our sport shoes and tie it. Then we get our drinking bottles and towels,and off we go walking.
I was tired so I had a drink. My Grandpa wasn't tired at all. So we went for a long jog until we reach home. My Grandpa had a sleep. I ask my mum if we could have food at Mac Donald's. We ate there and we had a great time.
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