Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts

Thursday, 14 June 2018

Why do we need to throw our rubbish?

I am learning to explain why people throw rubbishes on the ground.

Why do we think we have to throw rubbishes?
Because sometimes we get lazy and throw. Because none of us care. We never listen. Because we think we can do truth or dare to drop your rubbishes.

Why do you we do throw rubbishes in the bin?
Because we want to keep the school tidy and hygiene. We want to smell freedom. We want to get certificates or students of the week. We ask for help to clean the areas.

Thursday, 17 May 2018

Should we cut down Trees Or Not?

Learning Intention: We are learning to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can  persuasive someones writing.

I think people should not cut down tree

Trees breathe out oxygen because we breathe from them. They have fruits because we pick them to eat. We do not want to cut down trees because we need it to grow. It needs to stay healthy. Trees can not be cut down because their wont be any trees.

I think people should cut down trees

Trees can be made into a house. They need birds to live in houses. They can be cut down because they can be made into furniture's. They are important because they might fall down on us. They can be made into pencils or school stuffs. Image result for Tree

Wednesday, 9 May 2018

Homework! Yes or No?

learning Intention: We are learning to write a persuasive writing.
Success Criteria:

Yes
I am in Year 5 and I think children should do homework because they will get an A+. They keep you good at reading. The teacher will be proud of your homework that you finished. Homework is good because they make you smart at what your reading.

No
I am in year 5 and I think children should not do homework because homework is boring for us. We will get an F- because its hard for people to do it. Children are lazy to do their homework because they will not be able to move to the top group.

Monday, 12 March 2018

Does Television Make Us Clever or Not?

Learning Intention: We are learning to: write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade someone about my writing.

I think television does not make us clever because it has cartoons  full of violence. They showed people who hurt themselves and other people. It has movies that people say words that are not good. Television makes our eyes hurt from staying up too late.

I think television makes us clever 

Sometimes watching television makes us clever because it has News that tells us what is happening. They have the weather report that can tell us that it is going to rain or sunny. It has animal facts that tells us how they reproduce, or what do they eat, or how do they look like, or where do they live.

Watching television is bad because it gives us nightmares. If you sleep late for school you will sleep during the test,writing,RE,topic, and PE. Grown-ups sometimes have work so they watch TV