Learning Intention: We are learning to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can persuasive someones writing.
I think people should not cut down tree
Trees breathe out oxygen because we breathe from them. They have fruits because we pick them to eat. We do not want to cut down trees because we need it to grow. It needs to stay healthy. Trees can not be cut down because their wont be any trees.
I think people should cut down trees
Trees can be made into a house. They need birds to live in houses. They can be cut down because they can be made into furniture's. They are important because they might fall down on us. They can be made into pencils or school stuffs. 
L.I.- We are learning to write a recount.
S.C.- I am successful when I paragraphs in order using capital letters and full stops.
In the holidays my Dad and brothers and I walked to the Park. I saw boys playing Rugby. Then we walked away we climbed over the fence down the field. Dad told us to go see the view of the beach. I saw the water it was polluted I saw a big drain polluted water coming out. I saw a ball I got it and tried to kick it to the goal it got in.
After that I saw my cousin I went to him and said Do you want to go to the park with me. He said Hes dad won't let him go to the park. So me and my cousins I went Sione and Patrick we ran to the park. I got on the swing and push to make speed. Sione and I watched people playing touch. Some kids came to the park with us even my brothers too. My friend Petra pushed me on the swing really high. It was really fun
Then I ran to get my bottle back everybody went in their cars and went they said do you need a ride we said we will walk home. We started to walk home when we got there my Mum and dad went to buy us Mac Donald's. When they got home we came to get the shopping inside. We ate our Mac Donald's it was really delicious.
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story about Ash Wednesday in order, using capital letters and full stops correctly.
Yesterday our class went at the front of the church. We saw Father Andrew. Father Andrew said''you give up on your toys or something important like eating just one bite and save the rest for later. Matheus read out his work. He draw a tablet as his own treasure. Heneliena was reading it too. Then,the teachers burn the children's treasure drawing.
Next we went inside the church and we sang. After that Father Andrew and Ms Bullot put the sign of the cross on our forehead using ashes. Later we back to class.
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a recount using full stops and capital letters correctly .
One day my Grandpa and I went for a walk. First we have to put on our sport shoes and tie it. Then we get our drinking bottles and towels,and off we go walking.
I was tired so I had a drink. My Grandpa wasn't tired at all. So we went for a long jog until we reach home. My Grandpa had a sleep. I ask my mum if we could have food at Mac Donald's. We ate there and we had a great time.
My School Holidays
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
I can't wait to go to the beach !
On the holidays my two cousins, Auntie, sister and I went for a long drive to the beach. We stop at the ice cream shop. We bought jelly ice cream, chocolate ice, and another chocolate. We ate it until we arrived to the beach. We look for a spot and we sat there. My cousin and I found seashells and we play in the sand.
My sister went for a drive to get pizza. I went to the water to play with my friends. I went to the deepest water.
Later I got out of the water to eat chicken and chips. After we eat we pack our stuff and we went to drive home.
L.I.- W.A.L.T..... write a recount using descriptive languages
Success Criteria: I can do this when I can use descriptive words in my story.
The Chefs And The Two Doctors
Yesturday on Thursday 11 on may chefs and two doctors came to our class to get free lunch. They gave us healthy sandwich and fruits salads. In side the sandwich box was an oat cookie with chocolate. The chefs gave those food to us and we put it in the tables.
Then the bell rang we put our chrome books away and say prayers. We got our lunch and sandwich, fruits salads. After we ate our lunch we played at the park and say thank you to the chef's for bringing healthy food.
When it was home time we put our chairs in the tables and put the blinds down and we did prayers and everyone went home not me I was in the office waiting for my dad and mum.
