Breakfast By The Shore -by Moonia

                              Fish For Breakfast 

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- retell one of the after Easter story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can retell the after Easter stories by drawing a comic strip.

1. Peter, John,and James went fishing.

2. They fish all night but caught nothing.

3. Someone called out from the shore to throw their net on the other side of their boat.

4.Peter jumped into the water because he knew it was Jesus.

4. The disciples eat fish down by the shore with Jesus. 

The Day I saved Emily - By Moonia

                     The Day I saved Emily

Last Thursday I went down by the river. I saw Emily feeding the fish all by herself. Next, I heard her screamed for help. She fell in the water. I helped her out of the cold water with my clothes on. I got her out  and I was shivering. 

Her mother said,''Thank you for saving my daughter'' Emily was shivering and change her clothes. Her mum wrap her with a blanket and  she was sent to bed.

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T.- write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.